DOWN TIME
"This does not inspire confidence," Mona commented acerbically, surveying the scene before her. "Since when do we send drowned rats into the field?"
"I'm not deaf, you know, or dead. Though I'm sure you'd be happy if the latter were true."
That last muttered comment Mona acknowledged by an almost imperceptible lift of her lip.
Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
ReplyDeleteA lost love?
ReplyDeleteNo...more like a new field agent and her boss!
ReplyDeleteHahaha...she 'aint happy then.
ReplyDeleteNo, she's not! :)
ReplyDeleteawesome!!
ReplyDelete*smiles* Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWell done! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jud! :)
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome ;)
ReplyDeleteOops! Mona's either going to prison for a very long time or else she's going to live with guilt for a very long time. Maybe both???
ReplyDeleteMaybe she's hiding there hoping no one will find her? Lol Loved this write. Thanks for dropping by.
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I would like to read more on this one. I liked it a lot!!
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Love it...nonchalance.. ;0)
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