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Saturday, 28 January 2012

K's FIAF #73


FIRST KISS

She was as tense as he was.  The little quirk of her lips was perfect for the scene, but she held herself tightly, like a bowstring stretched to its limit...more than nerves at this first kiss in their love scene.  His cheeks creased in an almost imperceptible smile of triumph. 

Miss I'm-Not-Bothered-By-You was bothered...
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9 comments:

  1. Virginia ~Saturday, January 28, 2012 9:47:00 am

    Do go on. This has all the signs of a classic in the making. Film noir, perhaps.

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  2. Kae BSaturday, January 28, 2012 11:28:00 am

    Not a "film noir" -- this is about the real feelings between them that she has been denying, but that come out when they have to act a love scene together. It's hard to remain aloof and cold in such a situation, I imagine!

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  3. Nikhil P.Saturday, January 28, 2012 11:55:00 am

    So what happened? Did their noses get in the way? Did they succeed? Loved this story....:)

    http://nikhilpant.multiply.com/journal/item/873/The_wake_up_call_Fiction_In_A_Flash_73

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  4. Kae BSaturday, January 28, 2012 12:06:00 pm

    Glad you did, Nik! :)

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  5. jilli ♥Saturday, January 28, 2012 1:00:00 pm

    sounds like a first kiss.. :)
    nervous..but so exciting...

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  6. Kae BSaturday, January 28, 2012 1:45:00 pm

    And because it's a first kiss in a movie AS WELL, it's doubly nerve wracking! :)

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  7. jilli ♥Saturday, January 28, 2012 1:46:00 pm

    :)

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  8. Peachie M.Saturday, January 28, 2012 7:02:00 pm

    To quote a line from one of my favorite movies, 50 First Dates....."There's nothing like a first kiss!"

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  9. Kae BSaturday, January 28, 2012 7:07:00 pm

    :)

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