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Sunday, 29 July 2012

K's FIAF #99


WHEEL OF FORTUNE

On the little landing, her feet dangling in the water, she'd watched the dock across the way.  They lived in the house hidden from view above their pier. Sometimes she'd see them skim across the lake in their speedboat, happily ignoring her watching them.

Today was her last time here.  Tomorrow, she'd be over there...
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12 comments:

  1. Bill PurkayasthaSunday, July 29, 2012 1:43:00 pm

    ...with a chainsaw and hockey mask?

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  2. Kae BSunday, July 29, 2012 1:47:00 pm

    Who knows? You fill in the blanks as you please! :)

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  3. Pat AngloswissSunday, July 29, 2012 1:55:00 pm

    She got a job as housemaid??

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  4. Kae BSunday, July 29, 2012 1:58:00 pm

    Possibly... LOL!

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  5. driftwood beachcomerSunday, July 29, 2012 3:01:00 pm

    Well done!!

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  6. Kae BSunday, July 29, 2012 3:01:00 pm

    Thank you! :)

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  7. Bill PurkayasthaSunday, July 29, 2012 7:55:00 pm

    She looked at the water, wondering what secrets it held. Surely, the river had seen strange things over the centuries. Perhaps pirates had come up here to bury treasure.

    She chided herself for being romantic. At least the river kept its secrets.

    For instance, the corpses she'd dumped in it over the years.

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  8. jilli ♥Monday, July 30, 2012 9:16:00 am

    "Tomorrow she'd be over there.."
    Yes...I like this K.

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  9. joyce cooperMonday, July 30, 2012 12:13:00 pm

    I love it....it makes you wonder who is really watching you wherever you go...and it don't have to be bad either...just that nothing we do goes unnoticed...

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  10. desay unogratisMonday, July 30, 2012 12:26:00 pm

    Loved it .... go join the party....

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  11. Kae BMonday, July 30, 2012 2:42:00 pm

    Cool one, Bill! :)

    Glad you all liked it Jillian, Joyce, and Wolfie! :)

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  12. ninetynine reasonsTuesday, July 31, 2012 11:33:00 am

    *Cue the ominous music*..... you're great with the suspense write!

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