THE LAST TIME
This lushest tributary of the river was especially vivid today as they hiked by the cabin where they normally stayed overnight. Today was Ben's last here, before the move he couldn't avoid.
All he loved was here.
They came upon the wide river too soon, and waited, the silence between them deep as the river.
9 comments:
Lovely..simply lovely. :)
"The silence between them as deep as a river".
Nice...
Thank you! :)
" All he loved was here. " ....just reading this one line opened up so much mental highway, because we all know that no matter where we've been, once we leave it is still filled with memories, and if the people are gone...the place is so full...Wow!
I love what you did with this...!
Thanks, Joyce! It's a farewell kind of FIAF...just in case this IS farewell, you know?
Excellent!
Hope its not farewell. I do enjoy reading what you write for each picture! Deep silence..yes i like that bit.
Show off .... Heheh lovely write
Gotta give you SOMEthing to grouse about, Wolfie! :P Thanks, sweetie!
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