Sunday, 29 July 2012

K's FIAF #99


WHEEL OF FORTUNE

On the little landing, her feet dangling in the water, she'd watched the dock across the way.  They lived in the house hidden from view above their pier. Sometimes she'd see them skim across the lake in their speedboat, happily ignoring her watching them.

Today was her last time here.  Tomorrow, she'd be over there...

12 comments:

Bill Purkayastha said...

...with a chainsaw and hockey mask?

Kae B said...

Who knows? You fill in the blanks as you please! :)

Pat Angloswiss said...

She got a job as housemaid??

Kae B said...

Possibly... LOL!

driftwood beachcomer said...

Well done!!

Kae B said...

Thank you! :)

Bill Purkayastha said...

She looked at the water, wondering what secrets it held. Surely, the river had seen strange things over the centuries. Perhaps pirates had come up here to bury treasure.

She chided herself for being romantic. At least the river kept its secrets.

For instance, the corpses she'd dumped in it over the years.

jilli ♥ said...

"Tomorrow she'd be over there.."
Yes...I like this K.

joyce cooper said...

I love it....it makes you wonder who is really watching you wherever you go...and it don't have to be bad either...just that nothing we do goes unnoticed...

desay unogratis said...

Loved it .... go join the party....

Kae B said...

Cool one, Bill! :)

Glad you all liked it Jillian, Joyce, and Wolfie! :)

ninetynine reasons said...

*Cue the ominous music*..... you're great with the suspense write!