SHOWTIMEThe smoke irritated his nostrils, but he managed to stop himself from sneezing. He had to maintain an air of nonchalance. No sacrifice, like waiting in this smoky hot spot, was too great.
He held the cigarette between his fingers, watching the scene unfolding at the door, squinting against the smoke. There was the signal...
11 comments:
Hiya Kitti,
Love this...makes me want to know more. Well done!
I wrote something to this, but it's 500 words (I used the prompt for another writing site where I host the 500 word club challenge which I've been doing for years) and I had a hard time sticking to it. If you want to read it, let me know. I just didn't want to post it as a response to this challenge, since it clearly has too many words, LOL.
God bless and thanks for the wonderful prompts.
ooh undercover...
well I am testing to see if this reply button works as Ive heard others having problem. It if goes through... yippee. If not, I guess I join you into waiting for Multiply to fix the latest glitch.
(yippee). sorry that your's is giving problems though.
Why are you yippeeing, Crystal? I don't see anything but your comment!
Oh, I thought that's what I was testing. If we could comment as a reply. I replied to your blog.
No...click on the "Reply" button in my comment, and see if the box comes up for when you want to reply to only a portion of what I've said. It doesn't for me!
hmm. ok. I see now. when I reply to an indiv. note here. well yours doesn't even say "reply" and SHadowlights did until I clicked on it but nothing happened other than the word disappeared. I see edit delete and reply on my own posts but why would I want to reply to myself?
Yep...Multiply's glitching again!
. oooh wait... this time I click b/c yours DID have one. that's odd that some of yours does some doesnt/ and now I have a whole lot of choices in a comment box... audio reply, vid reply, cubmit, preview and spell check, cancel reply (3x they list that option. lol) yep. glitchy.
oh wait... hmmm, despite all those boxes and choices nothing still shows but the comment I made not the thing Im replying to. oh well. sigh. sorry.
submit not cubmit. I was typing too fast.
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