Saturday, 24 March 2012

K's FIAF #81

CLOSE QUARTERS

She moved to turn onto her back, but only made it half way before he was looming over her, his warm breath fanning her lips.  She wanted to laugh, but managed to stifle the mirth.  He was so damned handsome, so hot...and he hated her guts. 


And he was stuck with her for now...

12 comments:

L'Angelo Misterioso said...

Interesting twist!

Kae B said...

*smiles @ you* Yes...

L'Angelo Misterioso said...

And let me add well done! :)

Kae B said...

Thanks, sweetie! :)

Ward Kerr said...

I can't help but notice that they are staring down each other's nose.

Kae B said...

*chuckles @ Ward* Searching for boogers??? LMAO!!!

Thru The Lens - said...

Great post. Loved the ending.

http://digitalnomad.multiply.com/journal/item/224/The_novice_kisser_Fiction_In_A_Flash_81

Kaz CT said...

Oh this is brilliant and loved the twist

desay unogratis said...

Nice... Being stuck is usually a temporary situation.

Kae B said...

Thanks, Kaz! :)

Indeed, Wolfie! *grins*

Mythical Magpie said...

Stuck how? One wonders. :)

Kae B said...

Trust you, Maggie! *cheeky grins*