Saturday, 17 March 2012

K's FIAF #80


OUT OF HIS DEPTH

"What the hell could he have been thinking?" she wondered, exasperated yet sympathetic.


She approached him slowly, wishing she hadn't talked him into coming on this tropical jaunt.  He clearly didn't fit in!  How was she to handle this debacle?

Sensing his distress, she cleared her throat, and prayed she would say the right thing...

8 comments:

Thru The Lens - said...

This is an interesting write. I love the suspense. Loved the read and thanks for dropping by.

Tater Salad à la Mouse :) said...

You are such a romantic soul Teri. :)

marlicia fernandez said...

Well, that leaves me hanging. I wonder what she will say and how he will take it. And *why* doesn't he fit in? I want to know. Nice job with this.

God bless...

Kaz CT said...

Excellent - leaves me wanting more.

Kae B said...

Thanks to you all for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, Sue, I AM a romantic sod! :)

Thomas (Tom) Jefferson Thompson said...

:-)

Mythical Magpie said...

Oh, he's just being a wuss.

Kae B said...

*chuckles @ Maggie*