Saturday 14 January 2012

K's FIAF #71 (b)


RENDEZVOUS

Jonah inhaled deeply.  Ardith was already here...he sensed her presence in the sharper light of the ice-dazzled morning.  He smiled.  

It had been a long journey to this snow-bound hideaway -- weeks of mystic telepathic discovery. The miles he had traversed seemed nothing to those intimate moments that stretched between them like a living bridge.


17 comments:

Virginia ~ said...

What a lovely find.

Luxy (Monica) said...

HOT! Can feel the electricity!

Cheri K. said...

Lovely lovely. :D

Kae B said...

I need to keep all the bits and bobs of this story together, so I can put it together eventually, and post it all at one time here for you all to read!

Roger That! said...

That would be grand

Kae B said...

*smiles @ Rogsy*

Peachie M. said...

A rendezvous at Church. Hmmmmm......guided by fate maybe?

Nikhil P. said...

So the journey continues. Loved this piece.

http://nikhilpant.multiply.com/journal/item/859/When_the_frost_giants_arrive_Fiction_In_A_Flash_71

Nikhil P. said...

This story continuation reminds me of one of Stephen kings stories.....

irene ferguson said...

Oooh a nice one.

Kae B said...

Hmmm...it's not a horror, is it, Nik? LOL!

Kae B said...

Thanks, Irene! :)

Nikhil P. said...

Noooooooo.....I'm not implying anything. just that this continuation of a story in serielized form made me think of one of his stories. i just cannot recall the name just now. I'll have to hunt it up.

Kae B said...

Look forward to hearing it, Nik! :)

Nikhil P. said...

The dark tower.....I've only read two or three of his books in this long running series and one stand alone story. I loved the stand alone story which was a short story in one of his books.

Nikhil P. said...

The short stories novel was Everything Eventual. The stand alone version of the dark tower story was The Little Sisters of Eluria which i really loved. The ending was a bit sad yet well expressed...at least for me. :)

L'Angelo Misterioso said...

Nice :)