FIRST KISS
She was as tense as he was. The little quirk of her lips was perfect for the scene, but she held herself tightly, like a bowstring stretched to its limit...more than nerves at this first kiss in their love scene. His cheeks creased in an almost imperceptible smile of triumph.
Miss I'm-Not-Bothered-By-You was bothered...
9 comments:
Do go on. This has all the signs of a classic in the making. Film noir, perhaps.
Not a "film noir" -- this is about the real feelings between them that she has been denying, but that come out when they have to act a love scene together. It's hard to remain aloof and cold in such a situation, I imagine!
So what happened? Did their noses get in the way? Did they succeed? Loved this story....:)
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Glad you did, Nik! :)
sounds like a first kiss.. :)
nervous..but so exciting...
And because it's a first kiss in a movie AS WELL, it's doubly nerve wracking! :)
:)
To quote a line from one of my favorite movies, 50 First Dates....."There's nothing like a first kiss!"
:)
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